Mi00ky's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Young Love]

Aww, this is so cute. The boy's arms are a little far outside. Imagining him naked... it would look very odd (O.o) But I like your style allover, so I can oversee that (^.~)

JoashB responds:

Thanks for the feedback..I was trying to go for a pose in which he was sorta resting his weight on his hands in a way his shoulders would be raised, guess I need to work on that :p
Thanks! :D

[Macy]

This is really nice. But her Face looks a little strange. Her pose says, that she is happy. But the face seems, like she forces herself to smile, while she is actually sad. And I think it would be nicer if she would look into the "camera", because she is already pointing her arm and finger pointing into the viewrs direction.

What I love is her hair. It is flying so freely and snappy, not only her sideburns, her short pigtails too. I also lke the background. The trees look nice.

Twinkiesama responds:

Great critique. This is very perceptive of you to note the disconnect between the facial expressions and the pose. I do have plenty of time to fix it though.

Thank you and have a good day. :)